Typo No. 1
I just noticed my first typo in the book—on page 198, graf 2:
“At this moment, the stroller brigade arrived, too late for TV but still in time to have some fun. Four heavily middle-aged women whose heavy makeup couldn’t have contrasted more with the well-scrubbed look of the pro-choice gals unfolded six empty strollers and began pushing them in an oval in front of the Planned Parenthood supporters.”
The second sentence should read “Four middle-aged women whose heavy makeup…”
Oy. I have nothing against the middle-aged. I’m nearly there myself!













May 18th, 2006 at 1:25 pm
*snicker*
June 2nd, 2006 at 12:45 pm
ha! apparently middle aged comes in stages.
h the beauty of the blog. corrections from the author himself!
June 20th, 2006 at 7:22 am
i read your book last night. in whatever edition i have you name building 459 but there is no building 459, its building 429
June 20th, 2006 at 8:12 am
Ah, the perils of using the keyboard’s number pad. I really should get used to entering numbers the old fashioned way. But just think of all the time I’m saving! Thanks, Jess.